The IELTS General Training writing task 1 of the IELTS Writing Test requires you to write either a formal or an informal letter on a given subject. There are usually three bullet points provided in the task rubric for you to address in your letter. You are required to use 150 words to frame your letter in 20 minutes. The purpose of this writing task is to assess your functional writing skills. It is to check whether you are able to write different types of letters such as to apologise, thank, complain, suggest, give information, or ask for information in an appropriate tone, using the appropriate structure and language. Once you have read the question, identified the type of letter you need to write, make sure you address all the three bullets in your writing, and use an appropriate format and language to address the task.
One of the
key elements in the assessment is structuring the letter you write. So, make
sure you use the ODAC formula to plan and write your letter. ODAC is an acronym for the
four elements of effective letter writing: Opening, Details, Action, and Closing. All these four elements must be
appropriately used in your letter to achieve a higher IELTS band for this task.
Let’s look at each of these elements in detail as well as the language that
should be used in each of the sections.
Opening
The first
thing you must do when you read the prompt/question given to you is to identify
the type, purpose, and context of the letter you have been asked to write.
If you have
been asked to write a letter to your manager or your professor, it is a formal
letter, and if you have been asked to write to a friend or a family member it
is an informal letter.
The next
important step is to determine the purpose of writing the letter. Ask yourself
what function does this letter requires me to perform? Is it a letter of
complaint, apology, invitation or is it asking you to convey or obtain some
specific information?
In a
formal letter, the purpose of writing the letter can be clearly signposted in
the following ways, “I am writing to inform you about….”, / “In this letter, I
wish to raise the issue of….”, /“I would like to invite you to conduct a
workshop….”, /“I am writing to apologise…”/ “I regret to inform you….” In an
informal letter, the purpose of the letter need not be so direct and formal. It
could be a little more casual like “I just want to thank you for…”/, “I wanted
to ask if you….” / “I want to share some exciting news with you…”. In both
formal and informal letters, the purpose of the letter must be stated in the opening
paragraph of
the letter
The type of
letter you write will also impact the tone of the letter. Striking
the right tone and maintaining it throughout the letter is crucial for
achieving a higher band. For example: if you invite your friend to a birthday
party by writing “I am writing to invite you to my son’s birthday party”, you
are not using the right tone for an informal letter. This will bring down your
overall rating for the task. Similarly, if you begin a letter to your manager
with “Hi, Harry, I want to take two days off next week to plan my son’s
birthday party”, you are not striking the right tone for a formal letter. So,
the tone is conveyed by the language you use.
Details
Generally, in
the IELTS General Training writing test, there are three bullet
points provided in the prompt given to you. When you write your letter make
sure you address all three bullets. You must read each bullet point very
carefully. A single bullet point may require you to do two things. For example,
in a letter recommending a friend to do a particular course, the bullet point
could be “describe the course and why you think the course is right for him/her”.
If you only describe the course but leave out why you are recommending the
course for him/her, you will not achieve a higher band. Also look out for
plurals: “describe the things you had in your bag” implies that you are
expected to describe more than one thing in your bag. If you write only about
one thing, it won’t fetch you the desired band.
Each bullet
point must have a paragraph to itself. Every paragraph must have only one
central topic which should be the first sentence of the paragraph. Then add two
or three sentences to support the central idea of your paragraph. In the next
couple of sentences, you might need to give specific examples to substantiate
your main and supporting ideas. The final sentence of the paragraph is
generally a transition sentence that provides a link to the next paragraph.
Action
The last
bullet point of the prompt is generally an action-oriented one. It asks you to
give suggestions, take some action or give directions. So, in the last
paragraph of your letter, you must clearly state what you are going to do next
or what you want the reader of the letter to do.
In a formal
letter the action points should be framed as “Therefore, I would like to
suggest…” “I would like you to ensure that…”, Please let me know whether…”, “I
would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter…” For an informal
letter, the tone could be slightly more casual like “do let me know if…”, “make
sure that you follow my directions”, “let’s see if we can”, “I really would
like you to…”, “do get back to me for further details…”, “I really hope you can
make it…”.
These action
statements are generally followed by a reference to future contact. In a formal
letter, you could write “ I look forward to meeting you in person”, “I look
forward to hearing from you on this at the earliest”, “We hope that we may
continue our association” “I look forward to working with you in the future”…..
In an informal letter, the reference to a future contact could be something as
familiar as “let’s meet up soon”, “enjoy your event”, “really looking forward
to our trip”, “I hope to hear from you soon”, “give my regards to”. But
remember that being informal does not mean using SMS language or abbreviations
in any part of the letter. That’s a sure-fire way to get you a lower band on
the writing task.
Closing
The opening and the closing of the letter must be in
consonance with the formal or informal conventions of letter writing, see the
table below:
Salutation |
Complimentary Close |
Usage |
Dear Sir/Dear Madam |
Yours faithfully |
Formal |
Dear Mr. Sharma/Dear Ms. Shah |
Yours sincerely |
Formal |
Dear Rajiv/Dear Neha |
Warm regards, Best regards |
Informal |
Avoid the common mistakes of writing in the
IELTS General Training writing test like - Dear Mr. Rajiv i.e. using
the title and the first name. You will be marked down if you do not follow the
conventions given above with the appropriate salutations and closings for
formal and informal letters.
Closing the letter is extremely important. A letter that
does not have a conventional closing will not achieve a higher band on the
test. A mere “thanking you” is not considered an appropriate closing. It must
be followed by a “yours faithfully” or “yours sincerely”.
So do use our ODAC formula to structure your letter and that
will surely help you achieve a higher band in your IELTS Writing Test. Don’t
forget to practice before the test. Look at some past questions and attempt
writing a response. When you write time yourself and then assess your writing.
Review if you have addressed the question and responded appropriately.
Useful Language For a Formal Letter
Below is a selection of useful language for you to use in a
formal letter. The phrases you choose will depend on the context of
the question.
Beginning
I am writing this letter with regard to…
I am writing to bring to your attention…
I am writing to inform you that…
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with…..
Requests and Suggestions
I would be grateful if you would…
I would like you to…
I am entitled to request that you….
I was wondering if it would be at all possible to….
I would like to suggest that….
Ending
I look forward to hearing from you.
I look forward to receiving your response.
I await your prompt service.
I thank you for your consideration.
Please respond at the earliest convenience.
Useful Language For An Informal
Letter.
Informal language does not mean you can relax and write like
you would in a text message to a friend. Remember that this is an English test
and your grammar and spelling will have to be correct.
Avoid using abbreviations like ‘luv’ or ‘bcuz’. Also, don’t
use acronyms like ‘LOL’ or ‘OMG’ and never use emoticons 🙂
It is a good idea to use contractions like ‘I’ve’, ‘I’d’ and
‘I’m’. This is one of the ways that you can show the examiner that you know how
to write an informal letter.
Below is a range of informal language that you can use in
your informal letters. Which ones you use will depend on the context.
Stating Purpose
I’m just writing to let you know that….
I’m writing to tell you about….
Apologising
I’m very sorry about…..
I’d like to apologise for….
Asking for help
I’d be really grateful if you could…..
I was wondering if you would give me a hand with…..
I was wondering if you would do me a favour.
Expressing Satisfaction
I was over the moon to hear about….
I was thrilled to find out that/about……
Giving bad news
I’m afraid I’ve a bit of bad news for you.
Ending
All the best.
Keep in touch.
IELTS Letter Writing Checklist
Here are some questions you should ask yourself when
answering any General Training task 1 question.
Have I read and understood the instructions?
Is it a formal or informal letter?
Have I made a plan?
Have I included both the reason for writing and the 3 bullet
points?
Have I supported each bullet point with relevant details?
Have I used appropriate language?
Have I separated my letter into paragraphs?
Are my ideas clear and easy to understand?
Have I avoided copying the question and varied my
vocabulary?
Have I checked my letter for grammar and spelling mistakes?
If you can answer all of these questions you are well on
your way to writing a good formal letter.
Sample Formal Letter
On a recent holiday you lost a
valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of
anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of
your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you
would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my digital
camera while on holiday in Vietnam.
The camera is a black Canon 70d and cost $1550 when I
bought it new last month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixels, a Canon 67
millimeter lens and was in a brown leather case with my name on it.
I lost it when I was having coffee with my husband in the
backpacker area of Ho Chi Minh City. I believe the coffee shop was called
Highlands Coffee and it was on Pham Ngu Lao Street. We had been at the
coffee shop for around 45 minutes when I noticed it was missing.
I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the above
mentioned item and request that you send me details on what I need to do in
order to proceed.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest
convenience.
Yours faithfully
John Smith
(162 words)
Sample Informal Letter
You have recently started work in a
new company.
Write a letter to an
English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Tom
I’m just writing to let you know I quit my old job and
found something new.
I was really fed up with being a brain surgeon because
it wasn’t really much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if I’m not learning
new tricks, I get bored too easily and have to find something new.
I’m now teaching English as a foreign language in Vietnam
and it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a
kindergarten class, which is not only challenging but also rewarding too.
Can you believe it?
I also have some other amazing news- I’m getting married.
She was one of my first ever students and I guess it was love at first sight
for both of us. Make sure you keep the first weekend in July free, so you can
come and celebrate with us.
Keep in touch
Chris
(150 words)
Good luck with your IELTS test and happy writing!
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